Super Powereds: Year 2

by Drew Hayes

To say that Hershel was coated in sweat would give the impression that his perspiration had settled across his skin like a coating, merely encompassing him before ceasing its advancement. This image would do a great disservice to the amount of moisture being churned out by his body. To say he was dripping, that his slick coating was continually being shed and replaced, that would be far more accurate.

Why did it take a whole paragraph to tell me he was sweating??? WHY??

Bacon joined the former future fowls,

Are you serious right now? "Former future fowls" to describe SCRAMBLED EGGS???