I don’t like the fact she’s hurting, but I get it and understand her thoughts on if Everett is happy than letting him be.
I don’t like the fact she’s hurting, but I get it and understand her thoughts on if Everett is happy than letting him be.
Three issues:
— Extra inserted word, need to delete ‘on’ after ‘her thoughts’.
— Incorrect word choice, need to change ‘than’ to ‘then’.
— Incorrect punctuation, need to insert commas before and after ‘and understand her thoughts if Everett is happy’.
SB: I don’t like the fact she’s hurting, but I get it, and understand her thoughts if Everett is happy, then letting him be.
