Joyce Gray

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But the thought of what she told me this morning crosses my mind, and I frown at the thought of what she’s had be feeling. 
Joyce Gray
But the thought of what she told me this morning crosses my mind, and I frown at the thought of what she’s had be feeling.  Two issues: — Incorrect word choice, need to change ‘she’s’ to ‘she’. — Missing word, need to insert ‘to’ before ‘be feeling’. SB: But the thought of what she told me this morning crosses my mind, and I frown at the thought of what she had to be feeling. 
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