“I would’ve thought the same of Juniper, but she turned out to be a psycho bitch who was pissed she didn’t get her way. I’m too hyped about jumping in on finding Everleigh.
“I would’ve thought the same of Juniper, but she turned out to be a psycho bitch who was pissed she didn’t get her way. I’m too hyped about jumping in on finding Everleigh.
Two issues:
— Incorrect punctuation, need to insert the quotation marks at the end of the dialogue.
— ‘I’m too hyped about …’ doesn’t make sense to me as written. Could be it is missing ‘not’ before ‘too hyped’ depending on E.C. Land’s intent, but regardless it needs clarification.
