The Unseelie Throne (Maze of Shadows #3)

by Kathryn Ann Kingsley

“A hot bath is a luxury I do not believe I have ever enjoyed in my life.”

She does believe? Her having a bath before is a question? You’d think she’d remember something like that given how poor she was.

He rounded to face her wings spread wide in his fury.

I think a comma is missing here. He rounded to face her, wings spread wind in his fury.

She ruffled his fur. “Thank you.”

Not supposed to say thank you- it’s an insult. Apparently she forgot.

Her Unseelie traitor had come.

Finding out who this is and what Puck is up to are like the only interesting parts of the story remaining.

Yet you wish to spare your own purity and pride first and foremost. The goat gave you a chance to right your wrongs, and you ran and hid like a spoiled brat.”

Well this is true enough.

When the kiss ended, Anfar did not know what to say.

I don’t think anyone knows what to say. He didn’t exactly show any of these tendencies when he thought about bedding Abigail. 🤨 Something here isn’t right. 🤔