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Klara bit her lip, thinking. She wasn’t even sure how to answer that because she had no idea what she was even writing about. “I don’t know actually. I’ve been struggling a bit. I have a hard time focusing on my characters and feeling out their emotions.
We started chapter one from Klara's POV, then switched to Chis's at the begining of Chater two but switch back to Klara's without warning or apparent reason. a bit jarring, offputing, and awkward.
Chris flushed, thinking if he should admit he was observing her or checking her out. Which
And now we switch back to chris
Chris laughed at the banter. He had to be on his toes and prepared for anything with Klara. She was a firecracker. She wasn’t like the rest. Easily meltable. She bites, he thought.
We jump back.and forth between chis and klara withnp rhyme or reason
Ms. May pulled herself away from the window to pour a few glasses of sweet tea. She saw Klara smiling as she stayed glued to the window.
Limerence?
Why did men ever quit winking in the first place?
