But I’m also getting another strong sign now that I should leave here and go home. It’s because the person sitting next to me is still telling me all about how he believes the previous occupants of my house killed their son and got away with it.
The second sentence in this snippet very much infuriated me. While I understand the desire to hold the reader’s hand and guide them through the story, most psychological thrill seekers prefer to conclude these things on their own; there’s zero mystery left, or an ominously feeling created.
