And, like, vaginal teeth—whoa. Amazing. I think if anything we should get more of those friendly asides, and maybe also more sensory detail? After all this time, I still don’t know what downtown Cairo looks like. Is it skyscrapers? Are there markets or malls? What are the women wearing in the street? And, like, the village Shobrakeet—[shrugs] I can’t picture it at all. You have to remember we have zero references, so unless we’re given a shit-ton of description, we’re probably going to get it wrong.
Im kind of confused, are these actual peoples reviews on the book and if so, why include it in the book? It just feels so random.. Theyre giving constructive criticism as well so why not just fix the book with these notes instead of using them for book content? I may have to deduct a star because of the confusion the book has given me.
