“I’m serious. Let’s decide not to care. I would love to skip the we-don’t-know-each-other awkwardness and jump to the part where we’re friends.”
I'm a pretty tight writer, which means I most often find myself adding words while writing instead of deleting them, but these hotel scenes were the exception. Once these characters really started talking to each other, I couldn't make them stop! I had to edit down a lot of their dialogue here to keep the book moving at the pace I wanted!
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