Shakedowners 2: The Vinyl Frontier (Shakedowners #2)

by Justin Woolley

Edited by Vanessa Lanaway.

the helm chairs didn’t rotate.

Loss of contnuity by the author from Book I to Book II. The 'FSC Diesel Coast' had one (1) helm chair, and it did indeed "swivel." It was an important part of the storyline concerning 'Franklin's' interplay with 'Rangi's' incessant conversations.

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Author like some many in the scifi genre over the past few years, and with increasing frequency, has a peculiar writing fetish in use of "at least." Given how prevalent and pervasive these writing fetishes are ('smirk' a past example), a reader wonders if it's from writing software, or writing workshops/conferences, or outsourcing much of writing to beta readers & focus groups by authors.

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Iridius’s.

*Iridius' Same proofreading fail from Book I appears again in Book II. Lazy.

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*morning Loss of story continuity by the author once again, as evidenced by the "morning" [highlighted] in the previous paragraph and "morning" [highlighted] in the third paragraph following. Laziness by both the author and his editor.

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“There’s been nothing leave the moon,”

Neither the author nor his editor seems to think that there is nothing wrong, something missing.

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“in the twenty-first century, when Earth was facing the grave consequences of climate change,

In Book I, the author was in the main whimsicaly entertaining in his satirical story surrounding absurdity. In Book II, Cultural Marxism idealogy repeatedly and nakedly is his intent. The mask has fallen.

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