Ethan & Jag Destroy the World

by Maz Maddox

Jag ate three more peanut butter balls and caught the first half of a holiday movie he hadn’t seen yet. This particular tale was about a human living among the enslaved elves of Santa’s lair.

The last bits of jelly were licked from Olivia’s thumb as she got to her feet.

Passive voice instead of active; in this case one wants to know WHAT licked off that jelly, if not Olivia...