Behold Humanity!: May We Come In? (Behold, Humanity! #1)

by Ralts Bloodthorne

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Proofreading fail.

he

*the

ships

*ship's

isn't

*aren't

ludicrous speeds.

"Space Balls" reference.

make ship

**...make >a< ship...

Is

*It

"A Smaug?

Tolkien territory.

"Neo, we need an exit!"

Getting a little too "Matrix"esque.

tired

*tire Less reversed sentences & better effort proofreading.

fore-bearers

BRRRRRRRT!

Second time utilized by author...lame.

than

*that

the

*they Lack of proofreading is a major fail caused by laziness.

withing

*within Lazy sloppiness continues.

exterminate

new vermin who were protected the old cattle.

Garbled

none of its own attack craft had not managed

Garbled

an

*and Slovenly proofreading.

There

*Their

in-numerous

*innumerable

Rings's

*Rings'

AI's

*AIs

war

*wear

AI's,

*AIs

AI's

*AIs'

AI's

*AIs Proofreading has degenerated to lazy AF level.

VI's

*VIs

CEO's

*CEOs

CEO's

*CEOs

CEO's

*CEOs

VI's

*VIs

AI's

*AIs Going to highlight repeat proofreading fails henceforth. Life is too short to waste time on slothful authors.

liking

*linking

aVI's

refurbish,

*refurbished

Goliaths.

husband

*husband's

vomited

Third time usage; weak and vapid.

I am here to," A new voice

Garble, garble.

AI's?

vest

*desk

(Heavy Metal).

*delete parentheses and bracket with >'<.

VI's

VI's

I

Who?

Terran's

Cheapshot

Cheepeek "Cheapshot"

Explains "Cheapshot" a couple pages prioron page 498.