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I tried not to gasp like I was drowning, tried not to show the slightest reaction to offer the Ice God a hint of what was running through my mind as I stared at his radiant black wings arched behind his shoulders in the mirror.
Why is the same scene broken up like this? It’s the rest of the last chapter! You would think it would be a new scene with how the last one closed and this one opened but it’s the exact same scene!
He had his minion bring Archer—no, the thing—into my presence to torment and test me. I ordered myself to be steady, even though acid boiled in my veins. “Joy,” I said without much emotion. “Are you showing me that you’ll turn me into that thing as well, my Lord God?
Why didn’t she just act like she didn’t know who it was? She knows they messed with her memories so. Easy peasy.
Like a phony, I traced my thumb over her burning cheek, feather light.
Burning cheek? Loki, you’re an idiot. The author is making him so superficial as to say he was only drawn to her looks be because there are so many other attributes that tells him it’s not her but he says it is because she looks similar… wrong eye color, swag while walking, etc.
I wondered if there’d ever been stars above my kingdom.
Hold up. I thought she couldn’t leave hell until the trial was over, which it’s not since the crown was shattered and other contestants still live, the wolves for example. I thought they said the Wild Hunt would pull her back. I wonder where she teleported them to and how long will it take them to get to Loki, Esme or Marigold.
thought if I returned you to your Ice Kingdom, you’d be the opening I needed to end the Ice God’s abominations once and for all. I thought if we worked together, we’d take down Ragnarö together.
Not telling her the plan that obviously involved her was incredibly stupid. Plus, it sounds suspicious to send her there when she was all messed up like that.
For the first time, I felt warmth as another spark of flame shot up in my belly, roaring to life and announcing its existence. The new life! I felt him inside me. I pressed my belly protectively. I was pregnant with a son.
Roaring to life huh? A roaring magical embryo because it’s been less than a month since they first mated… and it seems like she hasn’t been here long.
I don’t want her to sense me since I need to solve an issue for us, and I can’t afford for her to detect me. She’d know who I am. Solve my ass. You betrayed our mate. You begged and begged for her favor and affection, wanting to mark her. And now it’s going to happen, you ran like a coward and an asshole. He hissed. I don’t want to mark her anymore. She’s wrong for me!
What? First paragraph basically says he knows it’s not her (the wolf) and the last sounds like he’s saying it’s Tessa and he’s rejecting her. Why doesn’t he just spell it out and make it clear? Too much ridiculousness.
I’m letting you figure it out this time. He added another chuckle.
Ridiculous. This woman is a threat, clearly, and he’s going to let him figure it out? Knowing Tessa is currently missing and in danger if this chick is replacing her? Make this shit make sense and be logical for a wolf that is obsessed with his mate…
She reached out to me, not to you, the wolf said. Before I could answer her, everything blacked out. I tried to re-establish the link but couldn’t. Even now, my soul still feels like it’s being hollowed out, as if I’ve lost my mate for good.
It’s funny how Loki has claimed her and the wolf hasn’t bitten nd imprinted but he has a stronger bond to her than the man himself… makes absolutely no sense.