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The snow villages of the Moonling newlands. The airy jubilees of the Skyling newlands. A few lands that hadn’t been settled by any of the six realms at all.
None of these are sentences.
Why attendants were banned from entering her quarters.
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The face belonging to the man looking down at her was amused.
Clunky
She stared back at the castle and resisted the urge to flinch. Instead, she broke through her mask of charm and made an obscene gesture at the palace.
You can't resist the urge to flinch, it is an immediate, involuntary reaction. Also, "mask of charm" is an awful and confusing description.
Breathed in salt and brine.
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But that he had rescued her.
NAS
Mean eyes that pinned her in place.
NAS
Only to regard her so dismissively.
NAS
Oro stood on the steps in front of his golden throne, instead of on it.
Well, I'd be even more shocked if he did stand on his throne
