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She was always smiling and humming, while Mom is cursed with a perpetual scowl on her face and looking at life like her glasses got smashed when she was plunged out of Nana’s vagina.
ok
This is obviously a man stalking me, and he must be cracked in the fucking head.
UNKNOWN: Sneaking off with random men, little mouse? If I catch his hands anywhere near you, they’ll end up in your mailbox by morning.
D aya takes Luke home while I take Arch back to the manor. He asked me to go to his, but I felt much safer at my own home. More in control.
So obvious and fucking stupid. Shit writing. You’re being stalked and he threatens to chop his hands off so you take him to your house to fuck?
This room is a glass box. The ceiling, the walls, everywhere around us is one big window.
U have a stalker dumb cunt
“Fuck, baby, that’s it. Let me hear you sing now.”
SING????
He beat his ex-wife to a bloody pulp on several occasions and made her life a living hell when she finally decided to divorce his ass. The woman is still in a psychiatric hospital receiving treatment for severe PTSD. He literally broke the woman, and while she spends her days trying to heal from his abuse, he spends his
Bad writing
But after a few moments, he develops a vagina and charges out the door and down the porch steps.
A vagina??
I cringe at the feel of his life’s essence dripping from his hand.
Shut up
“I can smell you,” he says.
Why
“Zade,” he whispers against my lips. “That’s the only name that will ever leave your lips from now on, especially when you’re making that little pussy feel good. And when I’m making that pussy feel good, then you can call me God.”
Suicidal
“You taste like fucking nirvana,” I rasp, before sucking her bottom lip into my mouth.
No
He releases me, slips a rose in my hand, and strides out of the bedroom,
Hhaahhhah fuck off so dumb
“Fuck, I can’t,” I groan, my body still working to adjust to the sheer size of this man. “You have five seconds before I rearrange your organs,” he threatens.
Cringe bad writing
That one might have felt like a whole loaf of bread. I can tell the girl can hit, but fists don’t affect me these days. I’ve grown too accustomed to the bite of a bullet instead.
Laughing its so bad and stupid
“Then will you be my daddy?” Fuck. Can’t say I’ve ever been asked that one before. I force a smile. Adoption isn’t out of the question, but that’s something I’ll have to consult with Addie first. She’d be her mommy, after all.
WHAT IS THIS WRITING
Goddamn nirvana.
Stfu
“You think I stalked you just because I wanted a quick thrill? No, baby. It’s you and me forever. Which means if I become a daddy, then you become a mommy.”
Is this real life i hate it
