Ordinary Monsters (The Talents Trilogy #1)

by J.M. Miro

She was pulling at her corset, reaching under her skirts in a most unladylike fashion to unhook a stay or two and in that way catch her breath.

Does this author have any sense of how corsets work??

The tatami again had been laid out and he stood looking down at it, irritable. It never did feel right, sleeping on a thin mat on the floor. But the inn was clear of vermin; and truth was, his back hurt him less in the mornings than it used to.

Japanese sleep on a FUTON on top of the TATAMI JFC

shouldn’t even hardly of stunned it.

I'm Pretty sure that "of" should be a "have"

and an uncollared shirt and

Theyre VICTORIANS and none of their shirts have collars ffs