Coddiwomple

by S.E. Harmon

If you’re going to be a good busybody, you invest time in learning how to fucking whisper properly. Have the discipline to learn your damned craft.

I didn’t particularly care for hospitals.

No one does, why do authors even bother with this?

The mind worked in mysterious ways sometimes. I couldn’t remember what I’d had for breakfast, but I could recall every single detail of that night.

It's not mysterious. This is literally how the brain saves or doesn't save memories. At its most severe, it is PTSD.

disorientated

This is British English, when he's supposed to live in Florida.

suffused in me

suffused through, maybe, not "in"

no bloody reason at all

Brit, again

“Disneyland,”

If they're in Florida, it's Disney World. Now I'm not sure where they are.