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Suicide, Drug abuse, Addiction, Self-harming, Violence, References to child neglect, References to child abuse, References to euthanasia.
Not enough to take her through the night, mind, and as Maddox wasn’t fussing too bad, I figured she’d been feeding him every couple of hours.
Not enough to take her through the night, mind, and as Maddox wasn’t fussing too bad, I figured she’d been feeding him every couple of hours.
Missing word, need to insert ‘you’ after ‘mind’ to form the proper expression.
Of course he wasn’t unhappy that she was turning into a termagant.
Another example of terms not commonly used in the US readers’ vernacular, especially in this genre.
Even if I hadn’t had anything more chemical than sugar and aspartame sliding through my veins for two decades, I would always be a junkie.
Even if I hadn’t had anything more chemical than sugar and aspartame sliding through my veins for two decades, I would always be a junkie.
Inconsistent data. This is not the first references to Storm being sober for a many years, but it doesn’t track with the timeline in his marriage / relationship with Keira. Cyan is why they got married and she is 11 years old. All the times he was strung out, detoxing, high on meth and cheating with the clubwhores happened throughout this time, so there is NO WAY he has been clean and sober for over TWENTY years.
"What’s your name? Or do you only answer to Prince Charming?"
"What’s your name? Or do you only answer to Prince Charming?"
Inconsistent data, Keira already knew his name, unless she was so shocked she didn’t remember it … but if that is the case, then how would she be able to enter it into her diary? See what I mean? Inconsistent and needs to be corrected.
