Had she been daydreaming? No … This was the soundtrack to Axxiom. Yes, Katrina was surrounded by the unmistakable harmonies of physics, chemistry, biology … quarks becoming atoms, atoms becoming molecules, molecules becoming life. And yes, her fingers were moving; there was sound coming from her instrument. Yet how could music sound like this? “When the music is heartfelt, it is even more important to play precisely,” Miss Satomi said. “Yes, eventually you can slide into the note. But the slide must enhance the note, not diminish it. For now, play the notes distinctly.” Miss Satomi’s lead was
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Its hard to put my finger on, but it just doesnt flow well. Simultaneously, a lot is being said without saying much. The dialogue is stilted; the interactions and events are described with flowery language, yet without enough detail to actually understand the mechanics. Especially since there are sci-fi/fantasy elements. Its seeming kind of rudimentary
