“Beauty and charm played into that, I suppose, but it was there. You’re kind, Harken, and that’s as much a part of you as the color of your eyes. She’s cruel. I don’t know if even she knew how much cruelty she had in her, but it’s free now.
How are we supposed to know who is saying this entire paragraph of dialogue? I thought it was Breen and imagined it in a female voice.
Then, I learned that it was Keegan, so I have to reread it and come into the notes to bitch about it! UGH!!!
