Reclaimed (Shadow Beast Shifters, #2)

by Jaymin Eve

battle

Battle? Thats a little dramatic. I thought they were sparring lol.

There was no reflection of humanity in his face.

Really? Just like that? This the choppy ish I'm talking about

Creatures, royals, and freilds, which included the Shadow Hunters, and now fronds. “How many other different races and subspecies are here?” His lips twitched. “We also have the clordees, who are a mix of shadow creatures and freilds.”

She leaned forward. “You’ve waited an eternity for this revenge, and I feel like you could have taken us straight into the compound. Only you’ve chosen this route!”

Irrational for no reason. Doesnt seem very angelic

Stalking into the town, the shadow creatures stayed with me and all I could hear were screams and the sound of running as everyone bailed.

This whole scene seems so random and careless

and… love.

Yeah see... This doesnt seem feasible with how their relationsips been written

dude!”

Ew

“We’re a day’s walk,” he told me. “I had to take us in the opposite direction so we weren’t ambushed while I saved your life.”

Really? No one came after them? Theres not enough written to make this make sense. This is what I mean by poor writing; the sttory is lacking and it feels like major moments arent developed

dude.”

Gonna highlight it every time to show how excessive it is