He found her in her bed—tender as a kitten, still and pale and breathless.
This is another line that wasn't in my original draft, but added later. It hurt me to write it and it (still) hurts me to read it. But I've found that it doesn't work for me if I attempt to write around the hardest things/moments like this. So I wrote it. I love her! I love him! I love them!
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