Shattered energy seemed to pulse from him like sonar. Tight blips of loneliness. Tallie translated the echolocation easily. She was lonesome and blipping, too.
I really like these sentences together! :) I reworked them several times...I reworked the first section of this book so many times I lost count. I wanted it to be as perfect as possible and I wanted the strong emotional connection that Tallie and Emmett have immediately to be recognized immediately by the reader. Here we have something they are both *feeling* about each other...although they do not vocalize it...yet.
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