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I don’t have any money he could scam me out of, and he seems wealthy enough on his own anyhow. If he’s after my virtue, well, he can have it.
Lol
tenancies.
Spelling error
“Have you ever been kissed, little rabbit?” I ask, stroking my thumb over his bottom lip.
Albuquerque
Have to point out that Dallas to Albuquerque is way too long for a day's drive
I stare at him in surprise as I take the items from him. “What if I’m a criminal? You ain’t even gonna run a background check?” “If you’re a cr-criminal, you need a job even mmm-more.”
“Sweet tea?” the waiter repeats as if Barrett’s speaking another language. “Yes,” he says calmly, when the waiter continues to look confused, he changes tactics. “How about regular tea?” The waiter nods. “Ice? Sugar?” He continues to nod to each question. “Perfect, bring me tea with ice in it and sugar.”
I guess they don't knowabout sweet tea up in Vegs!
All of them look surprised at the news of his job, and it’s only the fact that I’m a dignified, adult man that keeps me from sticking my tongue out and teasing that I told them so. Sterling isn’t like the other boys I’ve had.
Haha!
“I like that,” I say when he’s finished reading.
I wish the paragraph would have been included
Sterling was clearly uncomfortable around them earlier, if he was upset for some reason, I can’t imagine he’d have wanted to brave them again.
Comma splices and run-on sentences are bugging me
“If your ass was red and sore from a spanking, would that convince you? Do you need to be filled by Daddy’s cock and made to come over and over until you’re finally sure of my feelings for you?”
Hoo boy
When I adjust my erection and step out of the car as well.
Fragment
I don't realize until I’m bracing for the first swat until my body starts to relax, sagging against him while he keeps touching and kneading my butt and upper thighs.
Another obvious error. I must have missed this the first time because mostly listened to the audio
“Ooo, sss-somebody’s sore. Is that why you’re all smiley? Did your Daddy give it to you good last night?”
Love Em
“Cute,” Kiernan says, his voice dripping with amusement. I glance over and find Em blushing like crazy. He tries to pull his hand back, but Kiernan holds onto it for a few extra seconds before releasing it. “Don’t scare people who are here to ask us for money, Kier,” Barrett scolds.
“Let them stare,” he growls. “I don’t give a single fuck about any of them. You do belong. You belong wherever I am, now and always. And you don’t just belong there because of me. You have more beauty and substance both inside and out than a single other person in any room you step into.”
He's a sweet daddy
