The Straight Crimes
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“Thanks. You look real nice yourself.” She took the opportunity to admire him again. Although his toned upper body was impressive, it was his full lips, striking eyes, and admittedly, his firm butt that made her heart race. Harper couldn’t deny it. He was hot as hell.
Corinne Colbert
Is this book YA? I was under the impression this was a book written for an adult audience. This whole paragraph feels weirdly sexualizing. Teenager for an adult audience?
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And if you’re ever questioning your choices, just ask yourself, ‘how do I want to be remembered after I’m gone?’”
Corinne Colbert
This context makes no sense to me.
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“You’re kidding me.” Traci chose her words carefully as if not to vilify the situation.
Corinne Colbert
Doesn’t make sense
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He violently swung his arms to break free. “Shit! The kid just socked me in the jaw!” Gage yelled.
Corinne Colbert
Hand cuff him. This is legal.
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Patrick never told me her name. He said she was really worried about people finding out. I’ll admit, I can be a bit nosy from time to time, but I left that alone.”
Corinne Colbert
Is this not a small town? No one noticed a woman also disappear?
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it’s really not appropriate to allow company right now. I’m sure you understand.” “I’m not just some visitor. I’m her boyfriend.”
Corinne Colbert
Her reasoning makes no sense. This is red flag behavior. During stressful times one would want those they care about close.