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December 9 - December 17, 2020
I do remember
Missing paragraph indent
For
Format indent
her
car
Use truck or 4x4
span.
Span? Only British term? Spun.
screaming ‘Die bitch, die!’
Missing comma after screaming.
from the car was
Not a car, use truck or vehicle.
our party was stood there waiting
Delete was, ...stood there waiting for the boat.
the bars are dragged his
Change are to and, ...the bars and dragged his prey...
stood
Wouldn't this be standing?
flat it maybe,
Delete it
floor,
Use ground since it is outside
floor,
Use ground, outside
was stood
Use ...the cat stood...
Or was standing instead of was stood
car
Truck
car
Vehicle or pickup or truck
