A Town Called Discovery
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He keeps looking back, expecting them to come any second and is hit from the front with an impact that takes him off his feet to land on his back staring down to the arrow sticking from his chest with the word discovery in flowing script on the shaft and a length of silk ribbon tied on. Haha, gotcha…keep your eyes up. He tries to rise, thinking a single arrow might not be fatal but stumbles and falls with a great sickening fatigue pulsing through his veins that makes every inch of his body writhe in agony. A blink of an
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So where are the dogs????? This is utterly confusing!!!!!!!
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woman, begging her to stop them and that loss of her presence brings forth a crushing
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that have suddenly become very dry.
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me.’ She waits for it. Seeing
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familiarity between them that only then do they both become aware she is still holding
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god,’
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god…er…listen
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god
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Gods.
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Should NOT be capitalised.
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god,’
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god!’
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god…I can’t stop it.’ ‘It’s not even in properly…wow, you’re still going…’ ‘Oh, my god, oh, my god…’ ‘Jesus…how
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God needs to be capitalised, all of them.
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god,
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lord,
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lord,
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Pete move closer to Bear, resting a hand on his shoulder, ‘close your eyes, Monsieur…we
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Pete moved closer to....
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god…thank
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god,’
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god,’
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lord
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cans and tins,
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Cans and tins are the same thing, aren't they?
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‘Why are looking at me?’ he asks.
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'Why are you looking....
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god,’
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god
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god,
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Ma’am. I’ve been in a lot of pharmacists trying to work
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Shouldn't that be pharmacies or pharmacy's???
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god,’
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god…that’s
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god,
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god,
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‘I bet that hurt deep your tight ass.’
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Is this supposed to be right? It should be ...deep in your tight ass. !!!!!
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‘That’s okay, Zara,’ the big man rumbles, thudding off back towards the counter. ‘Listen,’ she says, reaching out for a pancake. ‘Uh-huh,’ Thomas cuts in, shaking his head. ‘It’s breakfast.’ ‘I was just saying that…’ ‘Say it after,’ he says. ‘I’m having me some Monday morning carb loading without work talk.’
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Isn't 'uh-huh' like saying yes, and 'uh-uh' like saying no??? So it shiuld be 'uh-uh' !!!! Saying, no, not now, it's breakfast!!!
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and five others…four of whom were killed by Bear when he reacted on seeing Roshi fall…’
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But why were the other Disconians attacking Bear in the first place? He was killing Robertand others from Freedom when the ones on Bear's side started attacking him!!!! Why???
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god,
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god…’
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