B.R. Carroll

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turn an emotion into a tangible thing by describing the texture of how it feels. Rather than stating your character feels angry, you could describe the flaming ball growing beneath his ribcage, the hot flickering edges singeing his lungs and boiling his blood.
The Anatomy of Prose: 12 Steps to Sensational Sentences (Better Writers Series)
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