The Master Photographer
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Read between November 4 - November 10, 2019
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The law firm sent a limo to pick them up for the trip to the airport. Grant had always wanted to have sex in a limo, but was afraid the driver might share the information of just how close stepsister and stepbrother had become. When the limo arrived at the airport, it went through a back gate on onto the runway and pulled up to the corporate jet. Their mouths fell open when they realized it was a 747. The crew greeted them and said they would be getting in the air as soon as Mr. and Mrs. Klaine arrived. While they were waiting they explored
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That's some law firm to have its own 747!
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the plane. They had never seen a flying apartment with two bedrooms. They got back to the living room as the Barkers arrived. As the plane began to taxi, they realized this 747 was flying from the Midwest to New York for 4 passengers. Suddenly $1,000 a day seemed like peanuts compared to the way the law firm spends money.
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Who are they travelling with, is it Barker or Klaine? Maybe the author did a global command to replace Barker with Klaine, and it did not pick up the plural Barkers. What great proof reading!
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Grant had seen pictures of Jenna in a bikini and looked forward to seeing her in the lighted hot tub. Felicia was Jenna's matron of honor and Trey had caught Felicia in a hallway during the reception.
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Shouldn't Felecia have been a maid of honor? I thought matron was for a a married or older woman.
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Jenna had been excited to get a call from Felicia and they squealed like teenagers when they saw each other for the first time in over a year.
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Felicia just saw Jenna that morning, when she was helping her shop at Lord and Taylor's. Either I'm confused, or the author is. Perhaps there are are two different characters named Jenna in the story.
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"You will love the villa and the countryside. The villa that you and Anna will live in is just about a quarter of a mile from our Villa.
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Who the heck is Anna? I thought Grant's sister was named Felicia.
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Grant and Felicia were amazed at the size of JFK airport. They had flown into LaGuardia when they came to NY on the Attorney Klaine's private plane.
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How the heck can you fly into LaGuardia on a 747, which is how they described Klaine's private plane. It had two bedrooms!
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As they were driving back to the plane, Felicia said, "That was wonderful!"  "The picnic, the swim or the sex?" "Yes!" Andino asked Anna if she would like to fly the plane. She looked at him in amazement. He said, "I have my pilot trainer's license, so if you would like to learn to fly, this could be your first lesson.
Long Island Reader
Here we go again. There are two people alone together, Felicia and Andino. All of a sudden Andino is asking Anna to fly the plane!
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As soon as Mrs. Jackson left for her meeting, Mrs. Brendson and Mr. Jackson were in each other's arms.  "Can that tongue of your's still turn a woman on?" "I will let you be the judge of that," Mr. Brendson said. It was like someone turned the clock back 25 years. The made love with all the passion they had experienced long ago. They showered together and were sitting in the den having a glass of brandy when Mrs. Jackson returned from her meeting.
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Mr. Brendson? I thought we got rid of that lowlife in the divorce.
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Mrs. Brendson slept in the guestroom that night thinking how good life is when you have true friends that know what you need. She returned home the next morning. The Johnsons closed the cabin for the season and returned home the following week.
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The Johnsons closed the cabin? You're talking about the parents of Grant Jackson and his sister Felicia Jackson. How can their surname change suddenly to Johnson?
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Felicia picked up the phone and called Amy in Attorney Klaine's office and asked her to conference her in with Attorney Klaine, Grant, Mrs. Brendson, Dick and Fred. She put the phone on speaker and waited while Amy connected each of them. Elena looked at her wondering what was going on. As each checked in she told them to hold on until all the parties were on the line. Elena whispered, "Am I in some type of trouble?" "Far from it Honey, I am going to make your day." Elena, Let me introduce you to Attorney Baxter, the best attorney in the world, his administrative assistant Amy, Mrs. Brendson ...more
Long Island Reader
WTF, Attorney Klaine now becomes Attorney Baxter and then switches back to being Klaine!