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rolled his eyes.
“Sweetie,
optimal
optimal
Evie took a breath. She had to remember to breathe. She hated not being fully prepared in any situation, but this one felt like it was so much worse. They couldn’t afford to have any mistakes, not with the entire ship and her crew on the line.
The author's "Zena Warrior Princess" ship's captain just sent down 18 shuttles carrying all the 'Tempest's' security personnel with other crew, and 4 fighters on-the-blind to the planet's surface after no survey shuttle went below the cloud cover to recon.
Stellar stupidity.
scoffed.
bulbous
torsos,
Multiple
belonging to the same person.
Singular
bulbous
smirk
scowled
scoffed.
rolled his eyes.
scoffed.
scoffed,
scoffed.
rolled his eyes.
ignoring Martial completely. He was completely ignoring Martial.
Redundant
Evie could already see the other dozen Athru closing in.
From where? No foundation.
eyes went wide with surprise
A surprised look came over its face
The repetitive writing throughout the series is a glaring weakness of both the author and his editor.
