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by discrete and varied paths.
discreet?
“This tasks exceeds
each others IDs
other's
as I pushed through the crack Man,
Wrong tact to take.
tack
Prestor John,
Prester is the usual spelling.
feel the thrum of the base
bass
Send them an email and attached a video file.
burying the lead
lede
Raptor you were right.
Raptor, you [vocative comma]
The tall, white guy
Not coordinate, no comma.
come on Landslide,
White nose was being broadcast
noise
put me in coach!
in, coach!
you gotta do it man.”
She was still unconscious, the cuff around her left wrist had enough
Comma splice
faking the the all-knowing
wretched again. This time a dry heave.
retched
on the top of ten-story apartment building.
“Okay Butterfly,
took the brunt force.
Go get ’em tiger.”
The taste of Jackal’s words were disgusting
was
Hey maybe I’m not
huge tuffs of dirt
Wrong word, I think.
the only other cognition
cognit
so he was in-between me and his gunman.
No hyphen
she could she my mouth open.
“And ClockWork,”
Not CamelCased anywhere else.
“We’re burning the midnight oil,”
Not the right phrase. The character means "We're burning daylight," but it's at night. "The clock is ticking" would work.
I explained about the nullifier,
Surely explained previously?
That’s right girls,
Focus up Ryan,
said something on the other line.
other end
Smooth Raven,
nine-foot tall super
nine-foot-tall
one of their member’s powers
members'
“What Ryan?”
the gunmens’ weapons
gunmen's
Batista
Ballista
my sister would do this thing
First we've heard of her - and the last we hear of her.
give me three maybe four minutes
three, maybe
“I failed you Charles.
if I got a jump on them.
the jump
“Micah is that you?
as unglued like Silhouette.
as unglued as
it was the link you shared wasn’t it? You
as forces, no one understood, ripped
No commas here.
Had I broke a protocol
“That plan, to use the nullifier
Which was attached to Ballista, and now isn't, with no explanation.
