Sidekicks (Superpower Chronicles #1)
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Read between October 26 - November 1, 2019
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by discrete and varied paths.
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discreet?
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“This tasks exceeds
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each others IDs
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other's
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as I pushed through the crack Man,
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Wrong tact to take.
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tack
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Prestor John,
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Prester is the usual spelling.
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feel the thrum of the base
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bass
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Send them an email and attached a video file.
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burying the lead
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lede
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Raptor you were right.
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Raptor, you [vocative comma]
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The tall, white guy
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Not coordinate, no comma.
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come on Landslide,
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White nose was being broadcast
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noise
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put me in coach!
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in, coach!
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you gotta do it man.”
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She was still unconscious, the cuff around her left wrist had enough
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Comma splice
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faking the the all-knowing
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wretched again. This time a dry heave.
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retched
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on the top of ten-story apartment building.
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“Okay Butterfly,
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took the brunt force.
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Go get ’em tiger.”
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The taste of Jackal’s words were disgusting
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was
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Hey maybe I’m not
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huge tuffs of dirt
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Wrong word, I think.
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the only other cognition
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cognit
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so he was in-between me and his gunman.
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No hyphen
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she could she my mouth open.
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“And ClockWork,”
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Not CamelCased anywhere else.
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“We’re burning the midnight oil,”
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Not the right phrase. The character means "We're burning daylight," but it's at night. "The clock is ticking" would work.
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I explained about the nullifier,
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Surely explained previously?
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That’s right girls,
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Focus up Ryan,
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said something on the other line.
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other end
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Smooth Raven,
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nine-foot tall super
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nine-foot-tall
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one of their member’s powers
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members'
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“What Ryan?”
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the gunmens’ weapons
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gunmen's
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Batista
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Ballista
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my sister would do this thing
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First we've heard of her - and the last we hear of her.
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give me three maybe four minutes
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three, maybe
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“I failed you Charles.
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if I got a jump on them.
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the jump
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“Micah is that you?
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as unglued like Silhouette.
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as unglued as
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it was the link you shared wasn’t it? You
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as forces, no one understood, ripped
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No commas here.
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Had I broke a protocol
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“That plan, to use the nullifier
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Which was attached to Ballista, and now isn't, with no explanation.
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