they’d have to plant this one on the inner rim of the bay, facing the dam, for the best shot at busting the levee. There’s where the problem comes in. Halfway across the still and stinking waters of Crescent Bay, there’s a flowing wall of blackness. Like a massive fog bank or an ash cloud churning in slow motion. It creeps steadily forward like airborne molasses, and scattered all along the perimeter, between her and her intended blast point, are the broken shapes of watchful Sleepers.
More totally senseless staging. What perimeter? Are the Sleepers in the actual bay? Does our author mean beach instead of bay?
