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agreeance
That isn't a word. AgreeMENT is what you mean
Her youngest, a girl, died when she was very young on one of her first flights. Or as rumor states…Maya?
There we go then. She's clearly the missing princess, no need to bother with the rest of the story 🙄
he groaned in contrast,
What? Groaned? Why? And 'in contrast' to what?!
“It’s because I’m a wolf,” Jordan explained, looking nonplussed.
Nonplussed kinda means confused. Why is she confused about the same thing that she's actually explaining?
peak
PeEk! 'Peak' is like a hill or the top of a mountain!
your
You're
Croy and I walked towards the back of the library as those around us started to quiet and my mate shook his head annoyed.
What? This makes no sense.
his rough dark voice stated.
Ugh
In my peripheral,
In my periphery OR In my peripheral vision
our small moment broken but not over.
That might sound cool, but it doesn't make any sense.
Atlas made a worried noise as both twins called out my name,
Why? Stupid.
one bitches
No. 'One' implies singular. 'BitchEs implies plural. What you mean is' bitch's'. And you need a better editor.
Moretti's
This is plural, and so that is a superfluous apostrophe...
comfortability,
This word doesn't exist
I had been right,
Are we in the past or the present here?
