Penny's Protector (Icehome, #9)

by Ruby Dixon

told F’lor you like surprises. Did I? I don’t remember. F’lor’s

Should’ve Flor for this POV.

We’re delicate flowers or something, and we can’t go around without a man. I snort to myself at that thought—how many times have I gone out with Nadine and yet she’s never drugged and kidnapped me.

This!

A girl puts a guy’s dick into her mouth and sucks on it

I don’t know by the BJ explanation had to be qualified with stating explicitly they’re only performed by “girls”. I can’t tell if Ms. Dixon is just oblivious and needs a beta reader or sensitivity reader to call these things out or if she’s anti-LGBTQ+.

Guys always went for thin, delicate chicks and Good Time Penny only got calls after midnight on Friday night, when other plans fell through.

I think this is an out dated stereotype and wish Dixon would move on from the constant fat shaming of her curvy characters.

toward the direction of the Ancestors’ Cave. I have never been, but the others have described it to me many times, and how to find it. It will take several days of walking,

Thaw not right. When the bad aliens land and take hostages from the ancestors cave Summer abs Wareck are at the fruit cave and are near enough to know it’s happening. It’s on,y like half a day or day away I think.

they will not trust her with me again.

Should be “not trust me with her” since he is the one that will have lost their trust, not her.

"If the time comes and you resonate to another, he will have to make room in the furs because I am not leaving you." I smother a laugh at the thought. "You'd be willing to do a three mating? Really?" "No. I will not take another mate. But you will be mine and I will try to tolerate another male long enough for you to resonate." His jaw clenches as if the thought revolts him. "Resonance does not have to mean a mate. Sometimes it means just a mating and nothing more."

I still really think this would be a great story idea.

I’m a little jealous. I want the everything. I want the fairy tale.