At the crest of the hill, the pickup truck swung out into the left lane and accelerated, and Smalls said, “Hey, hey!” Whitehead floored the gas pedal, but too late. Too late.
She should have hit the brakes, not the gas pedal!
This and my other notes are all indications of somebody writing in a hurry, and of an editor who doesn't know the material. Still, #28 is a lot better than #27
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