An Unwanted Guest

by Shari Lapena

They each grab an overnight bag.

There is no freak out or scares there is just minor shock seems unrealistic lost a point for this

I mean, they only slid into a ditch. No actual harm done.”

Bitch

he’s touching her leg under the table with his socked toe.

Whore

but now she wishes she’d never bought the damn thing, never popped into that fancy lingerie store a couple of weeks ago, blushing and hopeful. Suddenly she wishes they’d never come to this damn place, that she’d never had the idea. She doesn’t want to see her marriage fall completely apart. She should have left well enough alone; perhaps they could have gone on amiably ignoring one another, being too busy to examine their lives, their relationship,

Thats so sad

He’d made it clear to his strong-willed, wealthy matriarch of a mother that he loved Dana and that he was going to marry her.

I love Matthew for this + one point