Rules and Roses (Untouchable, #1)

by Heather Long

Eeling out of his grasp,

Um what?

But I hadn’t really looked at the closely at Jake’s.

That closely…

or at least they were having an intent conversation based on what I could see via my rearview.

Intense

I kind of wanted to hope on the phone and text—the

Hop

“That was more than I what I thought it would be,” he said.

Lots of quotes like this have a random a or I in the sentence that detracts from what’s being said.

If he would he forgive her if it had—but

Another example, extra random he.

side to glance at her, effectively removing his shoulder from his grasp.

Her grasp.

But he didn’t add that. Leaning close, he dropped a kiss a me before he said, “Come on,

A kiss a me

controllers pulled out like he’d just let them there the last time he played.

Left them there