Jeremy McLeod

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Dale finally issued the orders.
Jeremy McLeod
Again, don't describe the dialog he JUST SAID. Lead with this or change it to a non-descriptive phrase, like, "he eventually said." We know they were orders. We were "there" when he gave them.
Dungeon Calamity (The Divine Dungeon, #3)
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