Jeremy McLeod

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“Job board?” Adam politely wondered.
Jeremy McLeod
You can easily convey politeness through dialog, so try that instead of weird phrases like "politely wondered." Wondering is a mental process. Thats why the phrase "wonder aloud" exists. Try "inquired" instead.
Dungeon Madness (The Divine Dungeon, #2)
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