Jeremy McLeod

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The words that left his lips caused the fight to return to its previous intensity. “Father Richard… no…”
Jeremy McLeod
His words are what caused the fight to rejoin? Not the sudden presence of more enemies? You really need to stop talking about people's words. "The words" "his words" "her words" ... you're doing too much telling and not enough showing.
Dungeon Madness (The Divine Dungeon, #2)
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