Highlander's Dark Pride
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Rebecca shook her head covering her mouth to disguise the
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We have to defend ourselves should the need arise a good enough arsenal the noo.”
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He handed out knives, urging instructing them all to stab as hard as they could into the straw-filled sacks he’d hung to represent the enemy.
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However, the addition of a feather mattress that no longer was such a welcome addition;
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not turned you away from my bed; ever.”
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There was a bit of a draft because one the rooms
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He shook his head, casting about on his person for his pistols and was relieved to find that
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he was wearing.
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Alexander’s fingers ran comfortingly up and down her spin, through the thin muslin of her
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Both Emily and the gown she had been laid out when they arrived were missing.
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dropped her glass, scattering milk everywhere, the glass shattering it into a million pieces.
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running back with it toward Alexander as the rest armor fell in a loud untidy heap upon the floor.
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