The Complete Void Wraith Saga #1-6
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of my CO,
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"of my XO"
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Entire worlds
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"Entire populations of worlds"
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scrubbers began sucking the air from the room.
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Aren't scrubbers used to clean the air, and remove CO2? Pumps would be used to suck the air from the airlock.
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Hexonis system
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Is this system inhabited? If inhabited, the people there will die. With no warning of what will happen.
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Myths and legends often hold a bit of literal truth.”
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between him.
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"between him and her." "between them."
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Evaluate
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"Evacuate"
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“The aft engine is now offline,” the VI said. “Stern engine damaged.
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Aft and stern are basically the same. Aft is normally used as a directional term, while stern is a location.
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compressed tanks
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Compressed what tanks?
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looking at Dryker.
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"looking at Nolan."
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has been
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"had been"
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They held a perfect salute, every last one of them.
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You do not salute when called to attention. You come to attention and then wait for further orders.
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back into the air.
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"back into space." There is no air.
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was well-shielded enough
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"was shielded well enough"
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window with miles.
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"window within miles."
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they weren’t going down swinging.
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"they weren't going down without swinging."