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Guess, he
No comma
would are willing
Would be willing OR are willing
the mother said as she ushered her mother
Mom ushered her DAUGHTER
bounced on feet,
Bounced on his feet
dating.”. There
Only period inside quotes needed
“Me, I hear the name Inferno, and I have to justify the memory of a man who used to dress up as the Easter bunny and dad-dance around his front yard with that new image.”
as we both asked into an alley
Asked? How do you ask into anything other than a phone?
Being a mentor to Triton
Triton is *his* mentor, which makes him a mentee or apprentice
A rose by any other name would smell as sweet,’” Triton quoted. At my blank look, he explained, “A name is a name and nothing more.
This was quoted to I’m earlier almost verbatim
went to the tall to pay
Stall
they’d be very sharing
back to the prison.
He wasn’t there when he was called so back isn’t applicable
I waved her
TO her
The fork on her hand
In, not on
set it nearly to be
Nearby
Instead turned
and far more capable the three combined.”
and far more capable THAN the OTHER three combined.”
debate and that cannot
No ‘and’ needed
later, a bell rung,
Bell RANG
straight until
Comma here
