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Over explaining. She acts like she’s so much smarter and better than everyone else. Not a fan
Using big words to sound ancient and smart and otherworldly then goes back to regular modern vernacular
I thought it was a dagger?
Since when?
And he has no reaction to her weird references and slang —so over the top
They sure don’t seem worried about these supposedly terrible creatures. This dialogue doesn’t move the story along, it’s just info dumpy
SHE ALREADY WENT INSIDE UGH
What? No you didn’t. I don’t even know what that is
Dumb use of “hemmed” ALSO WRONG
Wrong use
Kick?
This annoys me. There’s no negotiation if you’re not trusting the paths at least a little bit
Hmph there’s bullshit on both sides with no sense of logic. Yay
Unneeded dialogueeee
THIS WOULD BE NICE TO KNOW!!
WHEN DID THEY PLAN THIs?
That was never previously mentioned. Classic.
Mellow dramatic. She literally swore a fae swear that she wouldn’t let anything happen to her. Fuck off Leander
Again.. mortal slang
MORTAL SLANG FFS
THE QUESTION IS WHO YOU DUMB BIMBO
Uncharacteristically rude
She didn’t laugh before!
?????
FORMATTING ERROR
But they just let the jolly 4 of them in easily 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
This was already established
It shouldn’t take this long to get to the meat of the story
This is just such a dramatic change of tone and it’s just not done well
Will the conflict f the previous chapter just be ignored? I think so!
That’s a clunky way to speak to soldiers
This should have been in the fight scene
Huh that’s new and convenient
Gag me. That’s unhealthy
Since when
She cries too much
AGAIN!!! MODERN SLANG WHERE IT DOESN’T FIT
They keep describing the actions of the horse like it’s a person.
There is no differentiation between the character’s voice. When you think that someone is going to be different, they’re switcharooed back into the same voice
NOT A VERB
She’s really not. Stop praising her for teasing. She wasn’t being diplomatic ugh
Okay that’s actually really funny
