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Entanglement (The Belt #1)
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This foreboding, coupled with a hangar full of high explosives, served only to ratchet up Aria’s sense of impending peril.
David P. Duffy
Kinda melodramatic and hyperbolic for a QI.
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chorus of retching.
David P. Duffy
Why is it that those SciFi writers who acknowledge nausea due to sustained "gees" during heavy engine thrusts, never seem to have a "space sickness" bag available? Here there is a drone cleaning up the mess, but no ziploc bag for crew?
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a towel that the drone presented to her.
David P. Duffy
How about a bottle of water and some breath mints too, from the valet "drone?"
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their way up to the bridge
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If not on the bridge, not in their private quarters, where were they during deceleration burn?
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in the end, they felt that since they had all come this far, they would all make the trip and visit the fabled enclave of Europa.
David P. Duffy
Also no need to leave a potential hostage alone, in orbit.
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stark
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stark
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stark
David P. Duffy
Seems author has lost his mojo or energy for the final quarter of the book. The writing has slipped precariously.
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“Bastards,”
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this is a declaration of war.”
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They have plunged us all into war,”
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“Bastards.
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of course.
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“Bastards,”
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“Of course.”
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Of course,
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Of course,
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of course.”
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“Of course.”
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To be continued…
David P. Duffy
Would be nice if in this book, the author had closed out or at least moved forward the plot line of the EPR not really destroyed in the explosion, but secreted on "Hermes." Just saying.