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May 18 - July 11, 2023
“Daybreak,” Achamian said, reaching out to scratch his mule’s snout. “His name is Daybreak.” For a Mandate Schoolman, no name was more lucky.
An interesting juxtaposition with the cold grey daybreak of his Nroni childhood fishing, described as promising "a punishing sun" paragraphs ago. In Seswatha's service the waking world is punishing, yet real infliction comes in the afterlife / Outside / dreams
Rather than follow any curriculum, which would have been impractical given the circumstances, Achamian adopted the Ajencian mode, and let Kellhus indulge his curiosity. He simply answered questions. And told stories.
Ajencis is said to have as many authors as readers, and is held as the default father of Three Seas philosophy. Here his 'mode' is freeform q&a. I think it'd be safe to read AJ as Platonic
White light flashed from his eyes and mouth, and words seemed to rumble down like thunder from the mountain faces. Then a line appeared from the earth between his outstretched arms, so brilliant she raised hands against its glare. It flashed upward, more perfect than any geometer’s rule, taller than the brooding Unaras, striking through and illuminating clouds, on into the endless black … The Bar of Heaven! she thought—a Cant from his stories of the First Apocalypse.
This is the first time Gnostic sorcery is described by a third person. Up to this point we've been told of fires started with 'a sorcerous word' and we've seen brief battles between the Scarlet Spires and Mysunai/Cishaurim, and between the Saik and Thing Called Skeaos. We've also heard about the Cants of Calling. Now, we have a display of why even Eleazaras is careful about pushing issues with Achamian.
This cant is sung to the tune of "Heaven" by Talking Heads ;)
“And sorcerers?” another voice cried. “Are blasphemers welcome as well?” The indignation and sarcasm were plain, but the undertones defeated him. Who spoke? A Nansur, from Massentia perhaps, though his accent was strangely difficult to place.
“Whosoever repents the darkness in their heart,” he quoted from the Book of Scholars, “let him raise high the Tusk and follow.” To be Inrithi, he reminded them, was to be a follower of Inri Sejenus. And who followed more faithfully than those who walked in his Holy Steps?
Taking the PoV metaphor of darkness as history, the audience is asked to cast adrift their past in literal and figurative (to Kellhus) senses. For Kellhus, this question comes at the same time as his own re-assessment of luck and the supernatural.
They were only a hundred or so paces away when the psûkari began Scourging them.” “It was the Scourge they used, then?” Iyokus nodded. “I would say so. And perhaps the Lash, as well.” “So they were Secondaries or Tertiaries?” “Without question,” the Master of Spies replied, “perhaps under one or two Primaries
We now know of two battle spells from Indara's Waterbearers, a rough range for the Scourge (and the notion that it would be unusual to Scourge so closely), and an approximate breakdown of their battle rank. We think we know there are 100-120 Cishaurim, three ranks, and a battle group of 14. Unit size in wartime being famously understrength, this showing is almost certainly not standard.
The breakdown might be 10-3-1 tertiary-secondary-primary as it feels unlikely the school would spend a full tenth of its strength without a sorcerer of the first order present.
He was a most extraordinary storyteller—he always had been—and for a time Esmenet found herself lost in the Battle of Anwurat and its wrenching intricacies.
This solves the narration problem of the battle on the Sempsis.
Presumably Achamian, described in the chapter headers as writing the Compendium, is our third person neutral narrator. This makes it odd we would see such a detailed breakdown. How could he have seen so many fields, even if he had been present? Wasn't he trapped by the Spires while the battle took place? But we know from his transcript of Kellhus speaking that Esmi has an excellent memory, and now we know that she heard the clearest version from Kellhus. Probably some of what we were told in the last chapter was simply colorful inference.
The Conriyan Prince snorted. “First you spit at my feet, now you call out my infirmities … Sometimes I wonder whether you earned those scars murdering manners instead of men!” Cnaiür felt like spitting, but refrained.

