The Thief Who Spat In Luck's Good Eye (Amra Thetys, #2)
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leaving Holgren and I to
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and me
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had Holgren and I twitching
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soldiers lay me flat
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broad, bronze shoulders
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massive, black block
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over one of the soldier’s shoulders
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soldiers'
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pale, blue light
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great, red streaks
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Agoth lay Holgren gently down and started
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I laid Holgren down
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Correct for once!
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First thing’s first.
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First thing’s first.
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square, black stone
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robust, bronze flesh
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should have stopped his heart front beating
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from
the latest financial endeavor I’d sunk some of our money into be it spices from beyond Chagul
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Mike
Thanks very much. My wife and I do actually have an editing business on the side - http://csidemedia.com/editing if you're ever interested.
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And I'll be extra-cheeky and refer you to http://csidemedia.com/wellpresentedms, which exists to educate authors about some of the more common errors.
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Well, now that you mention it... :D I'll be in touch!
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