Escape Through Time (Time-Travel Romance Series Book 1)

by Nancy Huber

unison,

Union, not unison

besides

Beside, not besides

Metrobius had noticed the family’s obscurity,

What kind of phrasing is that????

She had pondered over that question

It's just "pondered", not "pondered over"

Soon, her and Agapias

It's "she and Agapias", not "her and Agapias"

Anyway

"Any way", not "anyway"

Two days after her visit with Lucius and Porcia, Jade couldn’t wait to see how Quintus and Titus were progressing on her ukulele,

A ukulele? Seriously? How stupid!

her and Agapias

"She and Agapias"

“You never seize to amaze us.

You never CEASE (not seize) to amaze us

strange-looking piece

WHAT????

retrieving

Retreating, not retrieving

fur

"Hair", dogs don't have fur

The emerald green satiny fabric of her stola brought out the depth of her eyes haunting her captivator.

WHAT THE HELL???

Claudia had talked to her about this, and they had agreed to say she was a distant relative from the British Isles, which did belonged to the Roman Empire, if anyone was interested. Calming down the butterflies in her stomach, she looked at the gathered guest, who were, oh so intimidating.

This lady seriously needed a proofreader

I just assumed naturally that she missed her him,

WHAT??????

Years of training with the Roman Army made him look athletically dynamic;

Oh, for crying out loud!

wine plants,

WINE PLANTS??? How about grape vines?

“How about I ride you back home?

Now that sounds a little suggestive

Every-thing

This word isn't hyphenated

The man’s wife was from the South,

What, like Alabama?

loosing

Losing, not loosing

you have never went

OMG! It should be "you have never gone"

when they would be wed to become husband and wife.

Well, that's usually what happens