‘Come on,’ Caddy says, waving the bottle a little and nudging the box with her foot. ‘See what we brought you, Suze.’ ‘Is it furniture?’ I ask, and Rosie laughs. ‘No,’ Caddy says. ‘There are fairy lights in there, though.’
My favourite scenes to write are always the ones with the three girls together. I love them so much that they are often too long – I forget about plot and just let them be together – and I have to trim them down when it comes to edits. This one, their first scene together, was chunkier the first time around. Some dialogue was cut, a few little jokes and quips.
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