The Priory of the Orange Tree (The Roots of Chaos, #1)

by Samantha Shannon

Albatross Roost,

Clag

Another random word from british dialect for lump of dirt or snow. Danish origin

hawthorn

One of the 3?

River Catkin.

tick on his thoughts.

Weird but good

Crow Coppice

South Pass,

bordcloth

?

River Limber.

Sanctuary of Our Lady

damsam

??

slicing fingers and tendons, spilling guts like a cutpurse spilling gold.

Does a cutpurse really spill the gold?

hands gloved in wetness.

Wetness...uhhh...

Komoridu.”

Empress Mokwo,

Windward Hall.

Falls of Kwiriki.

Cape Quill—the

bonesinger.

From wathammer 40,000?

lightfly.”

Firefly? Again the normal term sounds more fantasy than lightfly

Scholar Ishari

Tané swallowed the ash of regret.

Only mention

Neporo,

Unending Sea

House of Noziken

affinity

Wrong word?

Cleolind Onjenyu

“Edrig of Arondine,”

Halgalant.”

It was traditional for a queen to be holding her swaddled daughter, the first time she appeared in public after her confinement.

Stop explaining to the reader!

strength. As Sabran lifted her goblet to her lips, only Ead noticed the tremor in her hand.

Literally everyone is looking and would have seen. So dumb.

Valour

Harmur Pass,”

Merrow King.”

Jillet Lidden

see.

Neither did she see it...she smelled it and felt it

“Answer me,”

Didnt ask anything...bitch

Her fingers grazed over the scar that led along one thigh, found the dew where it met the other.

Geez. Really? Gay sex in YA fantasy...

House of Lakseng

Kawontay.

Sea of Carmentum.

Caliburn-on-Sea

River Lissom.

Sure are a lot of rivers in this land...

commons

Commons instead of commoners

Serinhall.

“Lord Rothurt Beck,”

Another one mention character

Lady Annes Beck

Kantmarkt.

Sanctuary of Caliburn-on-Sea,

inglenook

Old scots word